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Razprava o pesnikovanju
Isht ::
Da nadaljujemo v posebej za to pripravljeni temi, kot je predlagala Nadezhda v Komentarji na Slam temi. Komentar na Slam
Torej, mislim da je Oscar Wilde bil cisto navaden narcisoiden egoist. Pa ne recem, Slika Doriana Graya, kljub zamorjenosti, razvlecenosti in nekaj popolnoma nepotrebnih poglavij, temelji na ful hudi ideji.
Ampak, a je kdo bral Uliksesa?
Naj citiram Oscarja Wilde-a samega: 'Ulikses sem napisal, da bi ljudje o njem razpravljali naslednjih 50 let'.
Salome pa, hja no, nagravzno zna pisat vsak. Pa itak ni v osnovi zgodba Wilde-ova, ampak je remake.
Komentarji?
Torej, mislim da je Oscar Wilde bil cisto navaden narcisoiden egoist. Pa ne recem, Slika Doriana Graya, kljub zamorjenosti, razvlecenosti in nekaj popolnoma nepotrebnih poglavij, temelji na ful hudi ideji.
Ampak, a je kdo bral Uliksesa?
Naj citiram Oscarja Wilde-a samega: 'Ulikses sem napisal, da bi ljudje o njem razpravljali naslednjih 50 let'.
Salome pa, hja no, nagravzno zna pisat vsak. Pa itak ni v osnovi zgodba Wilde-ova, ampak je remake.
Komentarji?
DoloresJane ::
Isht - Uliksesa je napisal JOYCE. James Joyce, sicer pa tudi Irec.
Naj tema teče samo o Wildeu? V tem primeru bo treba spremeniti naslov..
Naj tema teče samo o Wildeu? V tem primeru bo treba spremeniti naslov..
Isht ::
hmm, se nobenga odgovora.
Let's talk to myself for a while, shall we?
Ej, Isht, lej, tole sem napisal enkrat v anglescini. kaj mislis?
ZhoomZhoom
MMM
the bee in me is the cause to see, is the
reason to be hanging from an uncharted tree
BUT
WAIT A MINUTE
no tree is uncharted anymore, I've seen them
all
i've visited all the flowers
all the honey collected
and i'm licking my hands
MMM sweet
is this what honey is all about?
i hope so...
cause if every honey is as sweet as yours
then bee me be
and buzzing around and about your head leafy
and branchy; windy
land on your buds and bathe in it.
MMM
don't you just wish you were me?
Let's talk to myself for a while, shall we?
Ej, Isht, lej, tole sem napisal enkrat v anglescini. kaj mislis?
ZhoomZhoom
MMM
the bee in me is the cause to see, is the
reason to be hanging from an uncharted tree
BUT
WAIT A MINUTE
no tree is uncharted anymore, I've seen them
all
i've visited all the flowers
all the honey collected
and i'm licking my hands
MMM sweet
is this what honey is all about?
i hope so...
cause if every honey is as sweet as yours
then bee me be
and buzzing around and about your head leafy
and branchy; windy
land on your buds and bathe in it.
MMM
don't you just wish you were me?
Isht ::
Hm, isht, zanimivo. Nekako konceptualno nihilisticno, ceprav z ocitno maskulinizacijo.
Pravzaprav sem pognal brke, ko sem to prebral.
Pravzaprav sem pognal brke, ko sem to prebral.
undefined ::
> Pravzaprav sem pognal brke, ko sem to prebral.
Sam da ni blo še kaj drugega poleg. ;)
Sam da ni blo še kaj drugega poleg. ;)
Avenger ::
Isht, tvoj song (hmmmmmm ali kdorkoli je že to napisal) zveni kot nekaj, kar bi zapel beli črnc Eminem...
It is better to be hated for what you are than to be loved for something you are not.
Zgodovina sprememb…
- spremenil: Avenger ()
DoloresJane ::
Isht - ti morda repaš? Mislim - tvoji dve pesmi imata močan metrum. Nekaj mora biti na tem. 
Isht ::
okej, se ena:
Timer lobby
In syncronised loop hole
Brain wave
Who is to be the shepherd of my hands?
Why is there a toner cartridge
on everyone's tongue?
Time me, time me!
I will break your record
in spitting at the fraud
that I used to call my sanity.
Hail to the ME,
with the wristwatch
and the ink jet mouth.
You see, i can spit in colours, all the spectre is my sheet,
unlike my dear sanity, sanitised,
solemn, sudden.
Can you follow my timer speed on insane fuel?
Hey, I don't think so.
Not even I can do it, huh.
Makebelieve timer lobby.
Nadezhda: ne, ne repam. se pa med drugim ukvarjam z musko.
Avenger: kar se tega tice, mi je velik vzor (ceprav upam, da ga ne kopiram...) Saul Williams. Eminem me ne zanima. Saul Williams je pa dokaj mlad crnski Slam pesnik, veckratni zmagovalec ameriskega Slam poetry tekmovanja. Kar je nastopal na teh tekmovanjih, je neporazen, razen Sage Francis ga je premagal lani.
Predlagam, da si poslusas Saulov CD, Big Bang ga mislim da ima.
Vsi, ki pesnite, postajte svoje pesmi tukaj.
Timer lobby
In syncronised loop hole
Brain wave
Who is to be the shepherd of my hands?
Why is there a toner cartridge
on everyone's tongue?
Time me, time me!
I will break your record
in spitting at the fraud
that I used to call my sanity.
Hail to the ME,
with the wristwatch
and the ink jet mouth.
You see, i can spit in colours, all the spectre is my sheet,
unlike my dear sanity, sanitised,
solemn, sudden.
Can you follow my timer speed on insane fuel?
Hey, I don't think so.
Not even I can do it, huh.
Makebelieve timer lobby.
Nadezhda: ne, ne repam. se pa med drugim ukvarjam z musko.
Avenger: kar se tega tice, mi je velik vzor (ceprav upam, da ga ne kopiram...) Saul Williams. Eminem me ne zanima. Saul Williams je pa dokaj mlad crnski Slam pesnik, veckratni zmagovalec ameriskega Slam poetry tekmovanja. Kar je nastopal na teh tekmovanjih, je neporazen, razen Sage Francis ga je premagal lani.
Predlagam, da si poslusas Saulov CD, Big Bang ga mislim da ima.
Vsi, ki pesnite, postajte svoje pesmi tukaj.
Isht ::
p.s. Avenger: (samo jaz sam) sem to napisal. da ne bo kake pomote, NISEM prepisoval tekstov od koga drugega. itak se mi zdi, da bi morali ljudje sprejemati posledice LASTNIH dejanj (se pravi, da poleg odgovornosti zanjes pleve samo od svojih izdelkov) ampak to je ze razprava za kako filozofsko temo.
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