Poklic arhitekt - angleščina

V šoli sem dobil pri angleščini nalogo, da opišem poklic arhitekta. Spisal sem tole:

Architect is a person who plans, designs and monitors construction of buildings. He plans new houses, schools, churches, airport terminals, football stadiums ... The architect plans renovation of old buildings too. Its plans do not includ only a building’s looks. They show how to do electrical, heating, ventilation ... The architect must ensure that buildings are safe and strong and that they suit the needs of the people who use them.

The architect first talks to a client about their wishes and suggestions. Then the architect creates drawings for the client to review. If the ideas are okay, the architect draws up the final plans.
Architects generally work in comfortable conditions because they spend most of their time in offices. They spend some time at building sites too. There they see how projects are going. The work on the building site can be hard. The architect should not be afraid of height.
Architect must have drawing skills. He must know mathematics, speak two European languages and must read technical drawings. The architect must be innovative.

The architect can work independently, must be graduates of the Faculty of Architecture.

Design Arhitect plans inside or outside. Advise colors, materials, lighting, furniture style, furniture for individual rooms, combines old with new furniture or anly moved furniture or lighting added.

Landscape Arhitect makes plans for landscape regulation for large interventions in the environment and plans for rehabilitation and to smaller construction work. It works for the protection natural and cultural quality of the environment.


Sedaj me pa zanima, če je to tako vredu, tako slovnično kot vsebinsko.

Že vnaprej se vam zahvaljujem za pomoč in vsakršne namige in izboljšave tega teksta.

LP

To, kar je rekel technolog + "include" se napiše, pa prosim združi par kratkih stavkov, ker bo lažje za brat pa izgledalo bo malo bolj napredno vse skupaj :)

Na začetku bi moral dat An architect + to, kar je technolog rekel.

Le da sem jaz mnenja, da je vejica tukaj

They spend some time at building sites too.

nepotrebna. Pač pa bi jaz osebno zamenjal besedo "too" z "as well".

Hvala za vse namige,mnenje ...

LP

Ne, to ni isto. Pri njih je faculty oddelek na eni fakulteti. Vse v eni stavbi oz. kompleksu. Tako kot imaš recimo na naših faksih laboratorije, recimo laboratorij za umetno inteligenco, laboratorij za procesiranje signalov.... To bi lahko prevedli faculty.

Kje mešam pojma univerze in fakultete?

technolog je 14. nov 2011 ob 23:37 izjavil:

client about their wishes and suggestions.

ne their, ampak his. Al pa če daš client v množino.

Tukaj je OP napisal prav, čeprav verjetno nenamenoma :)
Their se uporabi namesto his/her, ker se ne ve ali je client ženskega ali moškega spola.

Lepo bi bilo, če sploh prebereš na kaj odogovarjaš.
-žiga- ti je hotel povedati je, da je prav tudi, če uporabiš ednino.
To pomeni, da je stavek,

client about their wishes and suggestions,

v renici pravilen, in ne rabiš množine.