Kako se vam zdi govorni nastop?

Republic of Kenya is state in souteast Africa wich have border with:Indian Ocean to the south-east, Tanzania to the south, Uganda to the west, South Sudan to the north-west, Ethiopia to the north and Somalia to the north-east.Capital and largest city is Nairobi.This is flag of Kenya.Black colour represents people of Kenya. Red colour represents death during the fight for freedom.Green colour represents landscape. White colour represents peace. Maasai shield and two spears symbolize the defense of all this things. Currency is Kenyan shilling. Kenya covers 581,309 km2 and has a population of about 44 million.
Prior to 2.5 million years ago in Homo habilis lived Kenya. They ware hunter and gatherers. Arab traders began to trade with Kenya in 1st century AD. In 8th century AD they built settlements on the coast. Colonial period begins when the Germans and the British colonized Kenya in 1885 and 1888. In Kenya they established farms where they produce coffee and tea. From October 1952 to December 1959,Mau Mau rebellion against British rule. On 12 December 1964 the Republic of Kenya was proclaimed, and Jomo Kenyatta became Kenya's first president.
Kenya is a democratic republic.Presedent of Kenya is Uhuru Muigai Kenyatta.They have multi-party sistem,parlament is lower hause,senat is upper house and cour.
Kenya have the biggest economy in east and central Africa but Kenya is stil very poor country. The biggest economy sectror is agricultural sector.Very imortant is also tourism and industry. Kenya exports:Tea,coffee,cut or fresh flowers vegetable,oil,fish,cigars and fruit. Keny import machinery, transport equipments, motor vehicles, metals, plastics and electrical equipments.

Famus Kenyans are:Juan Cali,Tegla Loroupe,David Rudisha, Paul Tergat and Barracka Obama. Kenya is active in several sports, among Kenya is active in several sports, among them cricket, rallying, footballl, rugby union and boxing. But the country is known chiefly for its dominance in Middle-distance and long-distance athletics. English is widely spoken in commerce, schooling and government. In Kenya spoken 69 languages. Offical languages are english an Swahili.
Chapati made from flour and water.Mursik is prepared from cow milk.Mandazi is made from water,sugar,flour, yeast, and milk. Ugali is from corn,water and vegitables or meat.
Sights of Kenya are:South and east Tsavo,Massai,lake Naivoska,Aberdares,Laka Nakuru,Moutn Kenya and Samburu Shaba.

Prosim za vaše mnenje Lp

Which has border; oz. še lepše which is bordered with.

The largest city, which is also Capital of Kenya is Nairobi.

Mogoče namesto da vedno represents govoriš reci raje Black colour represents people ...Red colour on the other side shows death during ... Green colour expresses the landscape. White colour is interpreted as peace.

"Prior to 2.5 million years ago in Homo habilis lived Kenya" ..tega stavka ne razumem :D

hunters and gatherers*

where they produced coffee*

"From October 1952 to December 1959,Mau Mau rebellion against British rule. " ...kaj?:) was the rebellion against the British rule?

Kenya has the biggest*

Turism and industiry is also very important*

Kenya is also very well known to it's tea, coffe,....which is exported ,... They also import ,...

Chapati is made from* (kaj to sploh je?) -> in ostale stvari k jih tm opisuješ; brezveze opisovat nečesa kar ne veš kaj je..če je slika okj, sam useen premal.

Sight of Kenya are .....no shit; morš mal bol zanimivo povedat :)

Uglavnm ne sam naštevat, to je dolgčas. Probi raj namest vsega tega naštevanja povedat 1 al pa 2 stvari in raj mal opiš to stvar; torej zakaj jo sploh omenjaš..morš prvabt ljudi, ne pa bit nek bedn star prfoks k se mu ne da več živet pa sam še naštevaš dejstva brez pomena :)

p.s.: sej je še več napak ampak te so res izstopale :P

Za začetek vrzi v Word in poženi spellcheck.

Govorni nastop običajno ni namenjen branju.

Janac je 2. jan 2014 ob 20:44 izjavil:

jype je 2. jan 2014 ob 20:43 izjavil:

Govorni nastop običajno ni namenjen branju.

kak ne?

Hint: Govorni.


Itak, če bereš z lista k en robot, boš moral ponoviti vajo, ker ti učiteljica ne bo šenkala tega. Usaj tista, ki ve zakaj se to dela.

Mnenje o tem govoru zavisi od ciljne publike, je pa splošno gledano zelo švoh :) (že sam spell check bo imel velik dela). Nobenih povezav med posameznimi stavki, ki so tu v obliki kratkih povedi. Združuj jih v daljše povedi, z malo več oblikovnega smisla.

Transformacijo prvega odstavka imej za vzorec in se potrudi z ostalimi:

šted> Republic of Kenya is state in souteast Africa wich have border with:Indian Ocean to the south-east, Tanzania to the south, Uganda to the west, South Sudan to the north-west, Ethiopia to the north and Somalia to the north-east.Capital and largest city is Nairobi.This is flag of Kenya.Black colour represents people of Kenya. Red colour represents death during the fight for freedom.Green colour represents landscape. White colour represents peace. Maasai shield and two spears symbolize the defense of all this things. Currency is Kenyan shilling. Kenya covers 581,309 km2 and has a population of about 44 million.

South-eastern African state Republic of Kenya measures 581 thousand square kilometres, owns a stretch of Indian Ocean shore to the east and shares its southern border with Tanzania, western with Uganda, and borders on South Sudan, Ethiopia and Somalia in the north. Nairobi is Kenya's capital and also its largest city. On this Kenyan flag, its 44 million inhabitants are represented by the black bar, their struggle for freedom and independence by the red bar and its natural landscape by the green bar. White stripes represent peace and the Maasai shield with two spears the security of the country.